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January 11, 2011
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From the moment I turned on you,
I've felt deserving of death,
For my feelings are and have been true,
I scream your name under every breath,
I see your smile in my mind as vivid as a photo,
I could sketch you purely from memory,
Outline all of your striking glow,
But for acceptible ability,
Though these letters of love may fall before blind eyes,
It's for you I still write,
Praying you dont think they're lies,
That one day I may hold you tight,
But now I Fear to say those words in my head,
That may push you away so far,
But I'd rather see my blood shed,
Than to deny my feelings for you,
You're the first I've ever felt this strong for,
Let's make one last fight,
to open the door once more,
And make it right
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I don't quite remember who this is about

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This poem speaks out to me in so many ways. I just recently got back together with my ex, who I've dated two times before, and I find the last three lines perfectly empowering.
I very much loved this poem. [:
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